Barney the Guitar-Playing Crocodile

Today I spent a lovely morn­ing down at Alph­ing­ton Pri­mary School in Melbourne’s inner-north talk­ing to the Grade Threes and Fours about my book, blog­ging and writ­ing in general.

They were a fun bunch and at the end of the morn­ing we all wrote a lit­tle story together. One stu­dent — Tom — did a draw­ing of the hero of our tale and another stu­dent — Annabel — tran­scribed as the rest of us made the story up on the spot. Thanks to all the kids who con­tributed to the story (which was mostly every­one!) Here it is.

BARNEY THE GUITAR-PLAYING CROCODILE
by the Grade 3/4s at Alph­ing­ton Pri­mary School

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Once upon a time there was a guitar-playing Croc­o­dile who got fired from a band. He had no job now so he had to play on the streets. One day a Mole came along and offered him a job in his band.

The End.

Nice one, Alph­ing­ton Primary!



6 Comments

Check out his sticker-covered gui­tar case! What a rockin’ croc.

yeah and a lovely trilby-esque hat, too!

Alphington Primay Grade 3B

Hey Andrew,
Thanks for post­ing our story on your blog, we think it’s great! Also thanks for tak­ing the time to come and speak to us today about your new book, we loved it! We’re look­ing for­ward to read­ing it in class. Good luck with your next book.
From Bek & Grade 3B

that’s as good as some of the stuff our year 9s pro­duce! great job!

tom bufadeci 3B

great book intrest­ing unex­pectered perficto

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